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July 27th, 2021

7/27/2021

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An Ode to Grandpa’s Two-toned ’78 Ford F-150
How Jump-starting a Battery Taught Me to Conquer Fear

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​It was a perfect spring day, and I’d just finished a short hike in a perfect spot with my perfect (well, almost perfect) dog. The perfect dog and I hopped in the car, and I searched my playlist for the perfect song to fit the mood. Although our country’s still in crisis on so many levels, I was feeling more hope than I’ve felt in, well, more than a year. The song needed to be right. And because the past hour had been perfect, the first song that popped up was perfect too: Sam Cooke’s “A Change Is Gonna Come.” 
 
I pushed play, and a Motown-infused orchestral arrangement streamed out through the open windows. Cooke’s sweet voice, touched with gravel, was the perfect match for his lyrics, a reminder that despite so much unrelenting sorrow, somehow, hope remains. As his mellifluous tenor soared to the high notes where he acknowledges life’s been too hard, hope washed over me. 
 
But the long absence of any sort of hope made its sudden return jarring, jolting me from the fleeting reverie. Instead, I thought, we’re fighting the same battles we’ve been fighting for millennia—will they ever, really, end? And if we can’t win the big battles, what’s the point of fighting the small ones? 
 
My subconscious nudged me, perhaps wanting to restore the all-too-brief sensation of blissful hope or maybe just wanting to lighten the mood: Have you forgotten that only a few hours earlier, you conquered something that’s frightened you since you were a child? Hmm, funny, I had indeed forgotten it already, even though it was momentous. Now you might be thinking I was afraid of “normal” things like spiders, snakes, bugs, etc., which are all good guesses. However, you’d be incorrect. I was afraid of…
 
Jump-starting a dead battery. 
 
If you’re asking why, and you probably are, I don’t know why, exactly. I suspect my father or grandfather was leaning over a car or truck or tractor engine, with another vehicle pulled alongside, and a very young me ambled up to inquire what they were up to. Most likely they looked down, gave a brief lesson about dead batteries, and warned me to keep away in case the battery exploded. Being a rule-follower, the warning stuck—although more than a bit too tightly. 
 
The good news is that once I was old enough to drive, there was almost always someone around who would take care of jumping the occasional dead battery––and enabling my fear. At some point in my relationship with my now-husband, he gave me a AAA membership, which he’s renewed every year since. Of course, these days, most cars and batteries are quite reliable, so between their reliability and trusty AAA, my battery-jumping fears were kept to a minimum. 
 
That reprieve ended in 2018 when I purchased my beloved late grandpa’s vintage truck, with all its vintage parts, and the old fear became an almost-every-week occurrence. But once again, someone else stepped in to take care of the problem—my teenage son, who loves the old truck almost as much as I loved my grandpa. My husband taught our son how to safely jump-start the battery, which I observed from a safe distance. Indoors. And despite the fact I’ve replaced that truck battery five times in fewer than three years, and my mechanic swears there’s nothing draining it, the battery works only when it feels like it. Which isn’t often. My son went off to college last fall, so I again relied on AAA or enlisted my husband to manage the jump-starting process. I’m married to someone who can jump a car battery and can fix just about anything, which is both useful and annoying. 
 
So on this perfect spring day, before I’d set off on my perfect hike, I thought I’d take the truck out for a Sunday drive. Of course, the battery was dead. My husband declined my request to “help” me jump the battery, directing me instead to Google, saying, “Isn’t it about time you learned how to do this yourself?” 
 
Peeved, I took my laptop outside and glared at the battery lurking under the raised hood. With an exasperated sigh, inaudible to the spouse hiding indoors, I plopped down on a bench to watch videos and read how-to guides. They all gave conflicting advice. As I felt my blood pressure reach new heights, I picked one guide that seemed authoritative, took a deep breath, and began following the steps. 
 
At a critical point, which means I was holding my laptop with one hand and attaching unwieldy battery cables to the terminals with my other hand, the spouse emerged, now eager to assist. “Do you know what you’re doing?” he inquired. I suggested he return to his comfortable indoor lair. He declined and instead stayed for the show, offering commentary that I ignored. 
 
A few minutes later, all the cables and connections were as the guide outlined. I cranked up my everyday car, let it run for the time specified, then cranked the truck. The old engine sputtered twice, then died. I tried again. The engine gave a single weak sputter, then died. On my final try, the engine was silent. Nothing happened.
 
Nothing happened. 
 
Nothing happened!
 
Nothing happened?
 
Why was I so happy? Because the engine and battery from either vehicle didn’t explode. There were no frightening noises, I was still in one piece, and even though the battery was still dead, I was very much alive. And if you have an irrational fear that you’re wrestling, that part about still being alive after conquering your irrational fear is really the most important part.
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​Why was I so happy? Because the engine and battery from either vehicle didn’t explode. There were no frightening noises, I was still in one piece, and even though the battery was still dead, I was very much alive. And if you have an irrational fear that you’re wrestling, that part about still being alive after conquering your irrational fear is really the most important part.

​This
 was the transformative event my subconscious had nudged me to remember as I sat in my car with my perfect dog on the perfect spring day with the perfect playlist. Once again, I felt the unfamiliar sensation of bliss, and this time it lingered, embracing me in the joy of accomplishment and the joy of conquering the tiny-but-powerful fear that had held me in thrall and dependent upon others.
 
Once again, my subconscious provided answers to my deepest questions. Conquering one small fear gives us the courage to battle another, perhaps more challenging, fear. But if we don’t acknowledge and celebrate those tiny flames of success—giving them the oxygen they need to continue burning––our internal fire may sputter and die.
 
As if that subconscious revelation wasn’t clear enough, the next day, trusty AAA towed the truck to my mechanic, who said the battery, the spark that brings the engine to life, was fine. It was the carburetor, the device that mixes the fuel and oxygen in proper proportions and keeps the engine running, that needed to be replaced.
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A New Approach

1/24/2021

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PictureMy grandpa in his youth.

A writer friend vented to me one day, frustrated that the characters in her work-in-progress were rebelling, not following the narrative and character arcs she’d outlined for them. Joking, my friend vowed to bend the characters to her will, eventually. She didn’t want any advice, just to blow off some steam. Besides, we’d already had a conversation in the past about letting the characters develop in their own way, the “let them come to you” writing truism. 
 
But the more I thought about it, the more it confirmed my belief that writing guidance, even if it’s solid, isn’t always understood. Sometimes, maybe even most of the time, guidance is best offered as a parable, a story that might connect and inform at a deeper level. Since then, I’ve recalled a true story that I didn’t want to write just now, but like my friend’s characters, it insists on being heard. 
 
Decades ago, when my grandfather, a farmer and county lineman, was still living, a series of dogs walked alongside him. First were the hunting dogs he’d bought, including Jimbo, a big yellow Lab who was my “horse” when I was little. Over the years, hunting dogs gave way to runaways from other less-hospitable homes. These dogs, usually pit bulls, wandered through the pine forests that circled my grandparents’ small farm, and sometimes the dogs even trotted down the dirt road, their paws kicking up sparkly puffs of mica-laden dust, until they reached my grandparents’ home at its end. 
 
Grandpa’s last dog, who’d come to him the wandering way, was a black and white pit bull mix. Now no matter how they arrived, purchased or unexpected, Grandpa always gave his dogs unusual names, and this one was no exception. Grandpa named him Reagan. Of all the dogs that had loved my grandfather, Reagan was the only one that was afraid of everything. He’d shy away, never aggressive, but fearful of being close enough to be touched by anyone other than my grandfather. Even then, he’d tremble, which told me all I needed to know about his former owner. 
 
In those days, I was in college and working part-time at a veterinary hospital. I’d make the forty-five-minute trip to visit Grandma and Grandpa about once a month, and each time I’d try a new tactic I’d learned at work to assure Reagan that I wouldn’t hurt him. I’d sit and call to him, try to walk alongside him at a distance, offer a treat, but nothing worked. If I came within twenty feet, he’d give me a sad side-eye, then lope away. At dusk, Grandpa and I would feed the catfish in his pond, tossing corn pellets from an old Folgers coffee can and watching the catfish, bottom feeders, churn toward the surface, their sleek gray bodies roiling in the feeding frenzy they expected every evening, like clockwork.
 
One spring evening after we’d fed the fish, Grandpa eased himself onto the ground, and I plopped down next to him. We watched the fish enjoy their supper as Reagan eyed us from afar. Every so often, Reagan would take a step or two toward me, and I’d turn my head just a bit toward him, offering an encouraging smile. Reagan gave me the same sad side-eye, hung his head, and walked off. 
 
“Grandpa, what’s wrong with Reagan?” I asked. “He seems to like me, but he won’t come near me. What am I doing wrong?” 
 
“Coot*, you’re not doing anything wrong,” Grandpa said. “I heard tell his owner beat him, and now he’s just afraid of everybody and everything. Give him time, let him come to you.” 
 
For once, I listened. I sat there, watching the catfish slow their feeding gymnastics as their hunger became sated. I sensed Reagan’s presence, but I resisted the urge to turn my head, or move at all. Motionless, Grandpa and I continued to sit on the warm, damp soil as the sun slipped behind the pine boughs. As the rays faded into the earth, I felt a gentle touch on my shoulder. I didn’t turn, I didn’t look, I didn’t move. I didn’t have to. I knew what it was. Reagan’s head rested on my shoulder, his breath warming my cheek. 
 
“I told you, Coot,” Grandpa said, still looking straight ahead at the fish. “All you had to do was sit still and let him come to you.” 
 

 
Another writing, and life, truism is that it’s ever-so-easy to give advice and oh-so-hard to follow it yourself. For a few weeks now I’ve been working on a New Year’s blog post that I thought would wrap up everything I wanted to say about 2020 and everything I’m looking forward to in 2021. It was crap. Yet I’d put off writing this blog post about characters and my grandpa’s dog because it didn’t fit with my New Year’s theme—even though I’d written the entire piece in my mind, over and over––I continued toiling on the post I thought would work. 
 
See what I did there?
 
Here I am, thinking about the good advice I’d give someone else, yet I couldn’t see how it applied to my own work. Sure, I wasn’t developing characters just then, but I was developing a narrative. And when the narrative I’d planned didn’t work, I ignored the one that kept resting its head on my shoulder, a gentle, comforting presence that had come to me unbidden. 
 
In this new year, no matter how many crises you’ve endured or how long you’ve waited to fulfill a desire, I hope you’ll take a few minutes to sit a spell. Although the day-to-day world may roil in front of you, give yourself some time to focus on the future. And when you least expect it, I hope you’ll feel the gentle presence of your characters, your words, your whatever-it-is that you’ve been needing for so long now. 
 
Wishing you peace, health, and happiness in 2021.
 
 
 
The plagues of 2020 and my doctor’s advice that I stay safely at home are making me think back to much happier years. In the ironic path that life constructs, I’m finding those happy memories are helpful and relevant to the writing and editing issues that my clients—and I—are dealing with every day. If you’d like to read more posts like this, sign up for my newsletter. I promise I won’t spam or overwhelm you—I don’t like it when people do that to me, so I won’t do that to you!
 
*The term “coot” refers to an eccentric, or grumpy, old man. I don’t recall ever asking my grandpa why he nicknamed me this, but I wish I had. 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Perspective

6/1/2020

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A few weeks ago, I took a walk through the abandoned playing fields of the high school near my home. Tender green leaves, gentle sunshine, and caressing breezes blurred and swept away thoughts of the invisible virus that seemed to lay in wait. The advent of spring and lack of maintenance had unleashed growth I didn’t believe possible on this once-manicured surface. Now, tiny three-petaled lavender flowers, golden dandelions, red and white clover, and leafy stalks obscured my running shoes. I recalled my grandma’s long-ago admonition to “mind where you put your feet––there’s snakes out there” as I ventured out to explore the forty acres of pasture and pines that encircled their small farm. 

Ever the rule-follower, even now I watched where I put my feet, stepping lightly so as not to crush the novel, verdant carpet, and was gratified to see the tiny blossoms spring upright behind me. Looking down, all was kelly green and lovely and blooming. Then I looked up. 
 
Ahead was a dilapidated storage shed flanked with broken boards, overturned buckets, and coiled netting caked with lichen. For writers, it’s where the main character would have found the body. I looked down at the field, then up at the shed, as if I were observing a vertical tennis match, then glanced around to see if anyone else was there and might be concerned about my mental health. 

But no, I was still alone. I pulled out my phone and took a few pics of the disparate scenes, thinking of one of my clients, a gifted author who writes mysteries, and wondered how she’d describe this setting. Would her character look across the field, missing or ignoring the hundreds of tiny flowers, and run to the tatty shed that concealed the victim? Or would the author draw out the scene, distracting the reader with fragrant blossoms until the character caught the unmistakable scent of decomposition? 

Of course, it depends on the author’s desires, the character’s arc, and multiple other factors. But I still wondered if the author would want her character to look down, or look up. As I pondered, I thought about perspective, such a useful word and concept, relating equally well to pandemics, life, and art. Here I am, out for a walk to escape the scourge, recalling happier times in my youth, and thinking about the craft of writing. Walking is a simple act that’s maintaining my perspective during a surreal time. 

It occurs to me a blog post about perspective might be helpful to other writers. And I cringe. Throughout my career, whether public relations or editing, I’ve been behind the scenes, hidden, the ballast the public doesn’t see, making my clients look great—and I embrace that role. As an editor, I help other writers craft their best possible work, from resolving daunting developmental issues to correcting misspelled words. I love my work, past and present, more than I could have imagined. 

What I didn’t imagine was that becoming an editor would shut down most of my own writing. At first, I thought it was the workload—after all, my priority is focusing on my clients and their writing. But after a few years passed and I still wasn’t writing, I had to admit it’s because I was afraid of not being “perfect.” After all, I’m an editor, dedicated to polishing and perfecting narrative until it shines. A few years ago, I came across an article where another editor had written about the importance of catching errors in blog posts, etc. There was an error in the first paragraph. I thought it was deliberate, but it wasn’t. There were a few more errors throughout. It happens, and it was another reminder that I didn’t want the public to catch my mistakes. 

Sharing work is an invitation for metaphorical snakes in the grass to judge, criticize, and shame—all those fears that keep writers from enjoying the writing process, submitting their work, and discussing it with editors. This is why my entire business is founded on supportive, uplifting, honesty-with-kindness editorial guidance. I would never subject a writer to any comment or action that made them feel “less than.” I’ve experienced that horror myself, and I wouldn’t wish it on anyone. 

Despite my fears, my first love was, and is, writing, and my muse is steadfast. Though I’m not writing on a keyboard or paper, I write in my mind and take notes. Still, I miss writing. I miss the bliss of my own writer’s high when the words whisper and flow as my fingers and heart race to capture their elusive beauty. I’m struggling to overcome the fear of sharing my writing, worrying it’s not my best work or it contains mistakes. The fact is, sometimes it won’t be my best work and sometimes it will contain mistakes. That’s writing, and I know that. I’ve coached many other writers through this very issue, so why can’t I do it for myself?

I looked at the images of the field and shed on my phone and typed in a note: Perspective. I put my phone in my pocket, then looked up. To the right of the ramshackle shed, I noticed a slim, steep, path. Shaded beneath pine boughs, it disappeared into the woods. Intrigued, I took a few steps for a closer look. For a moment, the past beckoned; once again, I heard my grandma’s loving warning. I hesitated, examining the path. It was blanketed with fragrant needles and dotted with small rocks. It would be a challenging climb, but it wasn’t frightening. Plus, there wasn’t a snake in sight. 

It’s all about perspective. And mine, at last, had changed. Tentative, but resolved, I ventured forth to explore. 












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